What do you think of my photography?

You're talented, that's for sure. The only thing I could tell you is maybe edit some of the flaws out, like stray hairs. Those may not seem that noticeable but to high-end fashion magazines, they count. Also, I would change the posing of some of your female models, they seem a little bit awkward but the lighting and overall idea is amazing. I wish you luck, and I hope you could benefit from my comment :D